Nov 13, 2022·edited Nov 13, 2022Liked by Robert Yoho, MD
I absolutely refuse to “whack you a few times”. We need to praise anyone who tells the truth these days, not punish them. Butchered is a stellar book and was the catalyst for a teacher I work with who’s wife was pregnant at the time to opt for far better care, as well as to question the legitimacy of the quackcine recommendations for their infant. I should have added that years ago I was part of determining the overhead rate for federally sponsored research along with Arthur Andersen or KPMG. What I learned from that experience was the amount of straight up lying and data manufacturing involved. I made quite a good living being a part of that harmful profession. I vowed to not be a part of lying or manufacturing data ever again. I fully understand your intent and I am impressed.
For what it’s worth I heard a Pastor Billy Crone draw the links between Claus Swab and Hitler.. his father worked with Hitler and that really he/they are just using Hitler strategies and values .. remove opposition, control the narrative, control medicine, introduces eugenics with no moral code, transhumanism being the new Arian race and promising to save the environment/world (climate change) that the 4th industrial revolution is really the 4th Reich..
The analogy sticks but who will see it, let alone stand against it..
There are some really good people in that organization who I am sure would be really excited about your project.
If you work directly with one person, it might help limit the scattered and chaotic feeling you might have when juggling multiple opinions.
An author-editor relationship is just that, a relationship. Ideally, it is a two-way street where two types of expertise meet and work in a mutually respectful partnership.
The double dashes before the reviewer initials should be long dashes (em dash).
I’m glad you connected with the Bitcoin community. These sharp folks understand the value of sound money. They see our Matrix more faithfully because they understand what happened on Jekyll Island.
Robert, why don't you confirm for good, in every single sentence you are writing, that it is true and complete, and then you will not need to correct/change/edit/etc anything anymore? You are not only wasting your time, you are wasting other people's time=life too!!
You certainly know the saying: garbage in, garbage out, which will bring no end to anything.
Just wonder how on earth, with that 'garbage strategy' you got so far, to become an MD, or maybe that's why you became MD?
I have just found that several of my acquaintances are also authors. Their strategies vary, from self-publishing to quite well supported systems.
Find what works for you; the first three attempts are like your first three attempts to suture, start an I.V. , or obtain an arterial blood gas sample.
Professional editors and proofreaders can help, but do not have your story.
I noted when attempting an L.P. that success was inversely proportional to the square of the number of people standing around watching- Thompson's Seventh Law.
I absolutely refuse to “whack you a few times”. We need to praise anyone who tells the truth these days, not punish them. Butchered is a stellar book and was the catalyst for a teacher I work with who’s wife was pregnant at the time to opt for far better care, as well as to question the legitimacy of the quackcine recommendations for their infant. I should have added that years ago I was part of determining the overhead rate for federally sponsored research along with Arthur Andersen or KPMG. What I learned from that experience was the amount of straight up lying and data manufacturing involved. I made quite a good living being a part of that harmful profession. I vowed to not be a part of lying or manufacturing data ever again. I fully understand your intent and I am impressed.
For what it’s worth I heard a Pastor Billy Crone draw the links between Claus Swab and Hitler.. his father worked with Hitler and that really he/they are just using Hitler strategies and values .. remove opposition, control the narrative, control medicine, introduces eugenics with no moral code, transhumanism being the new Arian race and promising to save the environment/world (climate change) that the 4th industrial revolution is really the 4th Reich..
The analogy sticks but who will see it, let alone stand against it..
Defeat the censors any way we can.
I agree with you. I have thought about the similarities between Hitler's time frame and now ours. Second verse same as the first. Uncanny!!
I highly recommend hiring a professional editor. I This a great organization: https://www.the-efa.org/hiring/
I did this in the initial stages of Butchered, but ultimately it boiled down to my own work.
I'll take your advice. Butchered was influenced much more by amateur editors than the pros, who touched it fully a year before completion.
There are some really good people in that organization who I am sure would be really excited about your project.
If you work directly with one person, it might help limit the scattered and chaotic feeling you might have when juggling multiple opinions.
An author-editor relationship is just that, a relationship. Ideally, it is a two-way street where two types of expertise meet and work in a mutually respectful partnership.
I read it and really liked the content and didn't see that many things. Dont edit it so much it isnt you speaking anymore.
The content was much better than many other books in that it is pretty easy for a non medical person to follow.
I do wish it was fiction tho. Haha.
The back cover looks fantastic! :)
The double dashes before the reviewer initials should be long dashes (em dash).
I’m glad you connected with the Bitcoin community. These sharp folks understand the value of sound money. They see our Matrix more faithfully because they understand what happened on Jekyll Island.
always more edits! thanks for the em dashes advice.
I appreciate and am considering this. I'll communicate with them.
I do not have problems with multiple suggestions. Many people see only one or a few flaws, and I consider everything carefully.
best
Robert, why don't you confirm for good, in every single sentence you are writing, that it is true and complete, and then you will not need to correct/change/edit/etc anything anymore? You are not only wasting your time, you are wasting other people's time=life too!!
You certainly know the saying: garbage in, garbage out, which will bring no end to anything.
Just wonder how on earth, with that 'garbage strategy' you got so far, to become an MD, or maybe that's why you became MD?
Read the first response above. Life is iteration. The info is there, the presentation is what is improving. You don't have to participate.
I have just found that several of my acquaintances are also authors. Their strategies vary, from self-publishing to quite well supported systems.
Find what works for you; the first three attempts are like your first three attempts to suture, start an I.V. , or obtain an arterial blood gas sample.
Professional editors and proofreaders can help, but do not have your story.
I noted when attempting an L.P. that success was inversely proportional to the square of the number of people standing around watching- Thompson's Seventh Law.
Ditto on the cover.👍
Let us know how it goes!